
Devil Inside by Clay McLeod Chapman
Author: Clay McLeod Chapman
Publisher: MIRA / Harlequin Trade Publishing
Format: ARC
Genre: Horror | Horrormance | Paranormal | Dark Romance
Publication Date: August 11, 2026
Rating: ⭐⭐⭐
Synopsis
After a terrible accident nearly costs bike courier and adrenaline junkie Jordan his life, he wakes from a coma feeling distinctly different. Everything tastes like ash, he feels increasingly disconnected from the world around him, and sometimes the people he sees don't look entirely human anymore.
Then he meets Lilith.
Their connection is immediate, intense, and strange, but after one passionate night together, she disappears. When another woman eventually approaches Jordan claiming to be Lilith, despite having a completely different face, his already fragile sense of reality begins to unravel.
As Jordan becomes increasingly drawn to her, he has to decide just how much darkness he's willing to embrace for a connection unlike anything he's experienced before.
My Thoughts
First things first... can we please talk about THAT COVER?
Because I'm not even going to pretend otherwise: I requested this book because of the cover. Purple and green are some of my favorite colors, and the second I saw it, I basically went, “Yep. I need that.”
So, five stars for the cover alone.
Unfortunately, the story itself didn't work quite as well for me, which was particularly disappointing because the premise sounded DELICIOUS.
Jordan is an adrenaline junkie who works as a bike courier and prides himself on making deliveries ridiculously fast. After accepting a particularly tight delivery and betting his friends that he can make it in time, things go horribly wrong when he collides with a car and nearly dies.
He survives, but after spending several days in a coma, something is clearly off. Jordan becomes withdrawn, feels almost dead inside, and begins seeing disturbing things in the people around him. Then he meets Lilith, and his already strange new reality becomes considerably more chaotic.
Their connection is immediate, intense, and very physical, but Lilith isn't exactly an ordinary woman. After their first encounter, she disappears, only for someone with an entirely different face to later claim that she is Lilith.
On paper?
SIGN. ME. UP!!!! Me and my other six personalities too!
In execution, however, I had a surprisingly difficult time connecting with the story.
Whenever Jordan and Lilith were together, I usually became interested again. Their encounters brought back some of the intensity, darkness, and weirdness that had initially attracted me to the premise. But whenever they separated and returned to their individual stories, I felt that intensity disappear.
After a while, it began to feel like the story was moving in circles. It would pull me back in, lose me, pull me back in again... and repeat. That stop-and-start feeling made the pacing difficult for me, especially because I kept waiting for the intensity of Jordan and Lilith's scenes together to carry over into the rest of the book.
Unfortunately, this also became a surprisingly difficult read for me to finish. I'm usually pretty quick when a story completely hooks me, but I kept putting this one down and ultimately took several days to get through it.
I really wanted to love it because the concept is wonderfully weird, dark, and intriguing. There were absolutely moments I enjoyed, particularly some of Jordan and Lilith's stranger interactions, but I never developed the connection with the characters or story that I needed.
I can easily see the particular brand of chaos here working much better for readers who click with the writing style. For me, though, this was one of those unfortunate cases where I loved the premise considerably more than the execution.
Final Thoughts
Devil Inside had such an intriguing concept, combining near-death experiences, horror, possession, romance and plenty of weirdness into something that sounded completely up my alley.
While Jordan and Lilith's scenes together occasionally gave me the intensity I was looking for, the rest of the story struggled to hold my attention consistently. I wanted to be completely consumed by their strange, dark relationship, but ultimately I felt too disconnected from the story for that to happen.
Still...
Story: ⭐⭐⭐
Cover: ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
Look, nobody said I couldn't have a separate rating system. :D
ARC Disclaimer
I received an advance reader copy of Devil Inside in exchange for an honest review. Receiving this copy did not influence my opinion of the book.
Thank you to NetGalley and Harlequin Trade Publishing for the opportunity to read and review this ARC. All opinions are my own.



